some believe that Increasing travels between countries enables people to learn different cultures. However, others think this can increase tension between people from different countries.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Dramatic increase in transnational visits has led to an opinion being divided as to whether this trend would effect greater misunderstanding or harmonious ties between countries. Although such development is not always welcomed in some areas, generally it is of great benefit to both sides.
the former view is often predicated on the belief that overseas holidaymakers would bring with them lifestyles that maybe incompatible to local people. For example, in Vietnam, Western visitors are by and large urbanites who have been accustomed to having parties until midnight, whereas the natives, especially the elderly, have a habit of sleeping early which means the local ones would feel irritated by and have an antagonistic attitude to the foreigners. However, this is not a common case because relationship between visitors and local people are usually economically motivated. International travel generates opportunities for local people to open businesses to accommodate foreigners’ needs, while international entrepreneurs can seek investment opportunities in new places.
the latter view believe that cross-cultural interactions can ease inherent tensions between countries. it is obvious that differences in social background, cultural values and religious belief might make the discrepancy between visitors and local inhabitants pertaining to certain issues indelible. Nevertheless, the higher interaction, the higher level of communication and multicultural understanding. For instance, Vietnamese people used to consider the American as their foes, but now they have forged concrete relations in many fields. Their divergence was enormous; however, over time they have reached some agreements on many problems, such as immigration and international crime.
in conclusion, despite some annoyance potentially emerging from encounters between the local and foreign, it is safe to say that international tourism plays a vital role in not only promoting business but also harmony between nations.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...its has led to an opinion being divided as to whether this trend would effect greater misunde...
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Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... divided as to whether this trend would effect greater misunderstanding or harmonious ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... is of great benefit to both sides. the former view is often predicated on the ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...estment opportunities in new places. the latter view believe that cross-cultural...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...se inherent tensions between countries. it is obvious that differences in social b...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...immigration and international crime. in conclusion, despite some annoyance pote...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94482758621 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27208493678 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662068965517 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2728257614 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.666666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210265643356 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713563238354 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586242135943 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117391305041 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274522377291 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...its has led to an opinion being divided as to whether this trend would effect greater misunde...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... divided as to whether this trend would effect greater misunderstanding or harmonious ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... is of great benefit to both sides. the former view is often predicated on the ...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...estment opportunities in new places. the latter view believe that cross-cultural...
^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...se inherent tensions between countries. it is obvious that differences in social b...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...immigration and international crime. in conclusion, despite some annoyance pote...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94482758621 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27208493678 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662068965517 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2728257614 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.666666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210265643356 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713563238354 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586242135943 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117391305041 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274522377291 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.