Playing a game is marvelous to experience for every individual and it has numerous benefits for them. it is believed by a group of people Olympic games help attract citizens from various countries and encourage them for playing in a place. While others believe that it is a waste of funds and it should be used in another crucial requirement. This essay intends to analyze both views with my opinion. I believe that other issues are more important than games.
On the one hand, playing games have plenty of benefits to the people to maintain their physical fitness and mental health. People at sports get adequate exercise and improve their overall quality of life. Moreover, the public can reduce the level of stress, anxiety and enhance their thinking process in a better way. Citizens can learn a plethora of skills such as time management, team building, and group working. Furthermore, they can also learn how to handle failure and how to overcome this situation. Interested people join this type of game and they can prove themselves on these kinds of platforms.
On the other hand, other issues such as education, health care, and the environment are quite essential for people and government. Find should be utilized in such a thing where people get the benefit more. Additionally, education is playing a primary role in the nation's development and better health care treatment makes the country happier and healthier. However, people meet at one place in the stadium, create pollution, and getting a chance to spread diseases such as covid and other viral infections. Besides, increasing pollution in the air is a vital subject and it is the most challenging one for the government. It should be controlled very fast as it is increasing in alarming conditions.
To recapitulate, games are important for people who are eager towards sports, however, other issues such as health care and education are also paramount to provide them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03715170279 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67079144356 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9515750811 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231688830298 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707276224551 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642141080591 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150207109478 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100965757141 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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