With more and more people preferring private tranportation, rather than public ones, major concerns are arrising related to the traffic, in cities and big towns, across the globe. There are number of factors involved, which lead to this issue, such as growing population and bad traffic management. However, some improvents in infrastructure can help to overcome this problem.
On the one hand, in last couple of decades, population has been increased rapidly and at a very alarming rate. Since growing number of individulas require more transportation facilities, it results in causing traffic problems in cities. For instance, in India, population in year 2001 was around 100 crores, which now stands at figure of 140 crore in 2021. As a result, sale of cars and bikes also increased in order to fulfill the requirements of travelling, which results in issues like traffic.
Expounding furthur, government should develop the new infrastructure like highways,flyovers and railway tracks, to meet the demands if increasing number of vehicals. Moreover, campaingns should be promoted, to create awareness among the people about benifits of using public transport. To illustrate, a bus can carry as many as 50 people, which otherwise would have required 25 cars for same number of persons to travel.
To conclude, eventhough, population is causing the problem of traffic, yet taking steps to improve infrastucture, combined with awareness among public to use more public means of transport can help to improve the situation
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e number of factors involved, which lead to this issue, such as growing populatio...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'crore' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'crores'.
Suggestion: crores
...ores, which now stands at figure of 140 crore in 2021. As a result, sale of cars and ...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , flyovers
...lop the new infrastructure like highways,flyovers and railway tracks, to meet the demands...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40585774059 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00819652562 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644351464435 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2163653685 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.454545455 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149410077868 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609661289996 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706874982325 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931095521522 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589395523336 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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