Some cities have vehicle free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city centre. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses taxies and metro on vehicle free days. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
State authorities take many actions to preserve the environment and vehicle free days is one of them on that day citizen should use only government transport vehicles rather than their personal vehicles. The advantages of that action of authority outweigh the demerits. On the one hand, the dominant disadvantage of using public transportation in cities is improper service providing to citizens. To explain, there are no sufficient public vehicles are available in any city, which satisfy the travellers need. Because on vehicle free days people have to use only public vehicles and there is too much hustle and bustle on roads for hiring vehicles,initially they have to work hard for finding free vehicle and if they get then they may have no seats to sit .And till they reached their point, they will tired and if they are employees this will lead to poor quality of their work.They have to suffer from many problems. On the other hand, there are two effective benefits of vehicle free days. The first and foremost one is, declination in pollution. To explain, if people of cities use public vehicles despite of personal ones, which are hotspots of pollution, in that way they can devote their efforts in reducing atmosphere toxic gases. Because as much as more vehicles as much more toxic gases emitting in atmosphere. For example, very polluted City, Delhi is also used that method to overcome the problem of air pollution. Besides this the another advantage of this is less consumption of fuels. To explain, if citizen used own vehicle to reach their workplace rather than public vehicles as the number of vehicle increase the consumption of fuel per vehicle increase that adversely affect the environment but also pocket. And if we continously using such energy resources than they will exhausted one day and future generation will deprive of them. but public vehicles decrease the use of petroleum, diesel and CNG primitive, by transport into the huge number of people in single vehicle to their destination .
In conclusion, although using public vehicle has a disadvantage which is dominant, despite of its advantages outweigh the demerits, such as reduce pollution and expenditure of fuel.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e in single vehicle to their destination . ...
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...n single vehicle to their destination . In conclusion, although using public ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10249307479 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72487733727 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506925207756 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.7902550907 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339739055036 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111687178032 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673958506961 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262386614022 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556470791053 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... actions to preserve the environment and vehicle free days is one of them on that...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion of authority outweigh the demerits. On the one hand, the dominant disadvanta...
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Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...using public transportation in cities is improper service providing to citizens. ...
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Line 1, column 680, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , initially
... and bustle on roads for hiring vehicles,initially they have to work hard for finding free...
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Line 1, column 789, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...y get then they may have no seats to sit .And till they reached their point, they ...
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...get then they may have no seats to sit .And till they reached their point, they wil...
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Line 1, column 836, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'tire'
Suggestion: tire
...ill they reached their point, they will tired and if they are employees this will lea...
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Suggestion: They
...will lead to poor quality of their work.They have to suffer from many problems. On t...
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Line 1, column 1171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...cles despite of personal ones, which are hotspots of pollution, in that way they ...
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Line 1, column 1745, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...se that adversely affect the environment but also pocket. And if we continously ...
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... but also pocket. And if we continously using such energy resources than they wi...
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Suggestion: But
...future generation will deprive of them. but public vehicles decrease the use of pe...
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...ure generation will deprive of them. but public vehicles decrease the use of petr...
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Suggestion: .
...e in single vehicle to their destination . ...
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Line 1, column 2055, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n single vehicle to their destination . In conclusion, although using public ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10249307479 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72487733727 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506925207756 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.7902550907 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339739055036 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111687178032 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673958506961 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262386614022 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556470791053 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.