Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that it is a men nature to be more energetic when compared with women. I disagree with this statement because, both men and women have equally competitive nowadays due to the education, employment, and changing trends.
Many people argue that feminine characteristics may involve in their overall performance in competitions, success rates, and unfortunate circumstances. Whereas, men would surpass such situations due to the impacts of their masculine nature, energy and inborn talent of strength. Similarly, women might be more sympathetic, emotionally unstable, and introverted behaviour would lead to minimal chance to reach the goal in contrast to the men. For instance, most of the political works, military and security services are carried out by men across the world.
On the other hand, since the dawn of educational growth, increasing opportunity to mingle with various dilemmas, technological advances are helping women to overcome many unfamiliar conditions to the core. Recently, women can able to compete for as much as men to succeed, earn achievements, and be more strong and energetic in many ways with the help of advancement. Most of the women are helping each other, providing support and encouragement to be active irrespective of their feminity. For example, in the Olympics, lots of women participants are reached at the level of men championship record and the overall scores are mostly equal in both sexes. Likewise, in many fields such as defence, political parties, parliamentary elections, and overseas developments, women achievements are not at the bottom level of men. In addition, the accomplishments of females are equally reasonable with men with the help of modern technical and economical growth.
To conclude, it is a belief that male genders could reach the highest level as their natural characteristic than women. While in the modern world women are equally active in many areas same with men in various ways.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
Some people think that it is a men nature to be more energetic when compar...
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Line 5, column 938, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...n with the help of modern technical and economical growth. To conclude, it is a belief ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...heir natural characteristic than women. While in the modern world women are equally a...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, may, similarly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38064516129 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0573838905 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570967741935 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4764880938 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214791527568 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080268499772 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601024620683 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152881513338 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666400663369 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
Some people think that it is a men nature to be more energetic when compar...
^^^
Line 5, column 938, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...n with the help of modern technical and economical growth. To conclude, it is a belief ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...heir natural characteristic than women. While in the modern world women are equally a...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, may, similarly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38064516129 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0573838905 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570967741935 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4764880938 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214791527568 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080268499772 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601024620683 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152881513338 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666400663369 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.