Wearing uniforms in the workplace is an obligation in some corporates, creating a unified purpose among the employees. However, this may reduce the staff’s productivities in office.
Dress code rises a cohesive meaning in the workforce areas, becoming an identity in the business fields. This is due to the fact that having the same suits as others decreases the probability of discrimination among the workers, and the employees do not have to worrisome, being criticized by other staff about their outfits. According to the research, the bullying cases in 2013 reduced to 1% in the office since the employee wore the uniforms on the first day of work, and the positive perspectives were given to the corporate as they have good teamwork. Therefore, I believe that another merit will be shown gradually in terms of work activities.
On the other hand, wearing office costumes every day may lead to boredom for the workers, reducing their productivities while working. This is owing to that all people wear the same corporate garbs at the same time, having fewer various colors and designs, while physiologically people need to see a plethora of colors to improve the brain's performances. For instance, the revenue of Mandiri Bank company falls to 15% after the regulation of uniforms is legalized by the CEO, and around 20 staff did not take part in informal meetings. Albeit this decreases the employees’ interest and corporate’s profits, I believe that having a free day outfit a week can tackle this problem.
To conclude, I believe that the company can gain more benefits if the uniform obligation is applied, leading them to have a good image in society. Meanwhile, there is a drawback of wearing the office’s garbs, so the leader should give a free day outfit to the workers.
- Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion 78
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Many teenagers now have their own smartphone What are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04697986577 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84970268083 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5024271273 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185076620493 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591583263596 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340551330965 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10463324608 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218297039444 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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