Having a smartphone for education purpose brings some merits for teenagers, leading them to get information faster. However, the students can be distracted by the notifications while studying.
Cell phones are equipped with advanced technologies, advocating the young people collect more knowledge quickly. This is due to these devices are installed with advantageous software, which allows them to get the information from any sources. For example, when college students have to complete their assignments about environmental issues, they can access the Google Chrome application to download the scientific research papers from experts, having chances to read reliable kinds of literature in one click. Those students may get some topics from any websites such as sciencedirect.com to develop their ideas, and I believe that this will benefit them to achieve their goals in terms of university activities.
On the other hand, electronic devices may interrupt the teenagers due to the notifications, distracting their focus in the class. This is owing to that handphones may receive messages and create some sounds to inform the owner since these tools are powered on. For instance, the notifications of social media such as WhatsApp and Telegram applications successfully take the students' attention during the class in the afternoon, leading to around 30% of junior high school students are distracted. Albeit these cell phones may disturb youths' concerns, I believe that they can mute the notifications in order to minimize the diversion of consideration in the school time.
To conclude, I believe that smart gadgets help the youths completing their school duties due to the fact that these devices are establishing beneficial applications. Meanwhile, there are a plethora of notifications that may attract their interests, so the older should control their mobile phone’s usage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...gram applications successfully take the students attention during the class in the after...
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Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this cell' or 'these cells'?
Suggestion: this cell; these cells
... school students are distracted. Albeit these cell phones may disturb youths concerns, I b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57986111111 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01937025553 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5998389309 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.916666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108442951792 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392371902959 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308265558293 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650028956163 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230878079538 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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