Some companies spend a lot of money on scientific research and use animals for testing. Many argue that this is for a just cause while others say otherwise. Do the advantages of using animals in research outweigh its disadvantages?
The use of animal in scientific study has long been the subject of heated debate. Number of individuals dispute about whether conducting experiment upon animals is beneficial. The objective of this essay is to discuss about if the pros of such experiments prevail over the cons.
First and foremost, animals are widely used in medical research in order to develop new medicines that are essential to human survival. This a fact that although animals seem different to humanity, their biology is extremely similar to human's and even some kinds of animals share almost the same genes with human. Therefore, using animals for medical purposes allows people not only to understand human bodies in health and disease but also to verify the efficiency and safety of medicines on human being. Thanks to animal researches, each year there are breakthroughs and new treatments invented, such as some types of vaccines for fatal and infectious diseases.
On the other hand, abuse animals for doing testing might put many kinds of animals on the verge of extinction. At the end of most scientific studies, the animals are humanely killed so more animal researches are done, faster the loss of animal diversity happens. However, if the governments had appropriate policies on controlling these researches, they would minimize the harm to animals. For examples, only kinds of animals that are abundant might be legally used for testing and scientists should get licenses from the authorities before operating any study on animals.
In conclusion, after evaluating both positive and negative points of animal research, its benefits seem greater than its drawbacks although this issue is still debatable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, even so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29259259259 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67939605831 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7035440195 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339247719577 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120909203242 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064133318663 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187682254535 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583269115523 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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