some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves.some people think it is good,while others think a there are disadvantages.Discuss both views give your opinion?
It is unquestionable true that advertisement is very common in any nation through it is basic technical any companies upsurge companies business and it can superb profit of shareholders.The root can that few masses ponder that there are drawbacks promotion any products.There are manifold reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects and see things in the right way.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.There most predominant a couple of years any companies man would increase their business day by
day that's why some business person sponsor plenty advertise.For instances, they must consumer a lots of materials like creams,clothes,college,school
university, sports and so on.Moreover,Ithink that it is good for youth because they knowledge it any thing surrounding the regions.After that, adolescent would awareness choose best thing herself/himself.
Moving on the next para,There are no denying that fact the,in my opinion,advertisement have not bad to any countries all in all they can easily conciousness about any new materials.Otherwise,some campanies
has development sponsor sports that's that todays kids have not involve out games.Lastly,they have only active on social websites.For examples, what apps, twitter, Facebook extra .Thus,
sometimes advertising could be fake but not all times.Hence,everyone can using products than everybody can trust it.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand many off spring throw some material advertising in the market.on others hand everyone can use it.Thus anyone could believe any conical products.Then,in my mind advertise not bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, lastly, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i reckon, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8305785124 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.98009184194 2.80592935109 142% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694214876033 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.777332284 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 352.75 106.682146367 331% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5 20.7667163134 291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116335833311 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706506272802 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00426278443908 0.0667982634062 6% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0488484399578 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177769275731 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 13.0946893788 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.42 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.25 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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