In the contemporary days, employees all over the world always have a clear policy about the age limits for working allowance. Recently, there has been arguments between people that weather old people should have a right to select their retired ages or not. This essay will both discuss about the benefits and drawbacks about this issue as well as suggest the best option to select.
In terms of advantages, there could be several ones. Giving people to choose to work to any age can create freedom for workers in which we can totally base on their own financial basement and enjoyment in work in order to decide to continually dedicate or leave. By doing so, as a result, might accidentally lessen the situation of being dissatisfied due to different desire in each’s career path.
On the flip side, things will change when we look at other aspects beyond the aspiration of individuals. By permitting old people coming to the workplace, some dangerous could probably happen. Firstly, their safety woud not be fully guaranteed. Despite possibly owning a medical insuarance, they could not help themselves if career accidents came to them in a sudden way, particularly for those who are constructing labors. Understandably, people getting old tend to have lower accuracy and concentration in work, along with the deteriorating health, it will truly be a big threat. Furthermore, in spite of their long-year experiences that can drive businesses to success by applying them in management, it is worthwhile to consider current reality when the young are increasingly proving their potential throughout innovation of working method to result in a splendid efficiency later on. This is to say, old people should give their chance to these incredibly new generations.
In conclusion, I assume that employees should only obey the rules and retire at the regulated age so that they can ensure safety and pass down their opportunities to young talents who can actually help businesses in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sudden way" with adverb for "sudden"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...selves if career accidents came to them in a sudden way, particularly for those who are constru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12576687117 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85092790255 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634969325153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1421458483 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187991667521 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597004370923 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543079311501 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104725626062 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307990147966 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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