Some countries are not popular with using a bicycle even though it is benificial for tham. why?
What are the possible solutions to envourage people to use more of bicycle as the main transport?
In the recent years, the modern society has recognized the significance of bicycle riding as a transportation on a regular basis, affecting human lives with healthy and well-being lifespans. However, some countries are commonly not used to ride bikes. In this essay, I will pose the reason why using bicycle is not popular as well as the ways to solve this phenomenon with some applicable supports.
To begin with, there are several factors that bicycles are not popular transports in some countries. As the first, even though bicycles are definitely environmental-friendly, the other modes of transportation such as cars, buses, trains, and flights are far faster and more convenient. To be specific, the latter vehicles are operated without many physical efforts, as it utilizes fossil fuels or gases and automatically runs. Moreover, as people's life styles have altered to be more hactic and busy, they do not try to spend long time to commute by using bicycles. Another reason is that there are not proper bicycle roads on the countsruction level. Thus, it is difficult to ride a bike on the common occassions.
In terms of the solutions of this trend, I suggest important methods to encourage the public to drive bicycles. from the individual points of view, the perception about bicycles has to change. It means that nowadays people consider their healthy lives, so they have opportunities to intensify and to regularly exercise by commuting by this fit vehicle. Furthermore, on the governmental level, for citizens' safty, some detailed bicycle laws should be established as well as governments supports the bicycle rad builds. As a result, by implementing the safe bicycle environment, people will be interested in the bicycles and use them.
To recapitulate, as I mentioned both the reasons of unfamiliar bikes and how to solve it, on the personal and government level, many efforts are needed to encourage peopel to ride it due to diverse benifits of using bicycles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14596273292 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05019065849 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2720730335 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353071987175 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109728607434 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816300077625 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193942122484 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885885442528 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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