The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.
The chart represents the changes made in global sales in three items; games software DVD/Video and CDS from 2000 to 2003. Units are measured in billions of dollars.
Overall, CDs had the highest global sales throughout the projected periods but which sales decreased every year. Meanwhile, DVD/Video and Games software showed an increasing trend.
In terms of CDs had recorded the highest global sales in 2000 which was at 35 billion dollars. The next highest sales were made in the following year of close to 35 billion dollars. These global sales decreased slowly to reach at about 32 billion by 2003.
In contrast, DVD/Video showed the drastic incremental trends over 3 years of periods. From 2000 to 2002, the sales volume for DVD/Videos grew from about 18 billion to around 27 billion dollars. By 2003, DVD/Video had experienced the highest sales in worldwide of approximately 31 billion dollars which sales figure was similar to CDs.
Meanwhile, the sales volume of games software had witnessed the steady incremental trends. Around 11 billion dollars of sales were made in 2000 for games software, which grew to 17 billion dollars in 2002 and its sales remained constant for two consecutive latter years.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'so', 'while', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260273972603 0.268076937826 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.123287671233 0.116061578633 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0867579908676 0.0759168565197 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0228310502283 0.0366838410393 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00456621004566 0.0131127313244 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146118721461 0.155750635184 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0456621004566 0.0379272487307 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52128135583 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0319634703196 0.0210936926555 152% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0684931506849 0.0948980150116 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0182648401826 0.00967000014798 189% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1217.0 1161.00487805 105% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.9 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11557788945 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376884422111 0.337110787985 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286432160804 0.247514529752 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185929648241 0.171178102325 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115577889447 0.112407865282 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52128135583 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48743718593 0.546246751206 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.5820488006 49.3433353143 84% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5833333333 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9963291726 42.9750493124 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.416666667 135.714022679 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.689975730869 48% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 45.2265494137 47.7609492067 95% => OK
Elegance: 3.0 2.94281807926 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371672826406 0.418131533498 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0944461789736 0.181151798455 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105185141958 0.0850326197045 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.627613375459 0.706616315825 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144927813138 0.157042692854 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181200426457 0.228904883108 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082036876242 0.108899403657 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355640630445 0.367819155151 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103602572054 0.0812612215331 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270256687821 0.316326947829 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578906869608 0.0921553760075 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.08536585366 269% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 11.0 3.02926829268 363% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.