Some countries are struggling with an increase in crime rates. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some nation are settle against with the risein the propotion of crime.A large number of people believe that it is esential to have more police on the streets to deal with the problem. From my point of view, there are pros and cons of this method but i agree that cops are the key to control .However closed-circuit television cameras are important too.
First of all, the appearance of police on the street may scare criminals with the fear of getting caught and being punished by cops.When the police become more and more on streets, they won't have chance to steal or maybe kill someone. For example ,this leads to the decline in the rate of violent activities .In VietNam in the years between 2000 and 2022 after police forced doubled .For the reasons, more patrolling is necessary to observe the accomodation which have high rate criminals.
Secondly,police are essential to maintain discipline in the community.Having more crops may control violent activities of crime and prevent citizens from being hurt. The resident will feel safe and CCTV cameras are indepensable device of police to instill a sense of fear,who are going to perfom a wrong activities or acting some violent activites on streets.These are used to reduce violence and catch lawbreakers by identifyng their face and linking it to national database.For example, statistics show that the appearance of CCTV cameras decrease most of violent activities by 24-28 percent .Therefore,survillence helps a grat deal in reducing crime
In conclusion some nations are worrying about the rise in ratio of crime.It is argued by most of people that the best choice to decreasing wrong doings is having more police force.In my opinion law enforcement play a vital role in reducing crime,but other methods such as installing CCTV cameras on the streets is significant too
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06622516556 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90315596336 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 232.029272579 49.4020404114 470% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.0 106.682146367 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.3333333333 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.3333333333 7.06120827912 316% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296114538328 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141941958532 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811289915413 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183498750646 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541697495224 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 13.0946893788 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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