Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime.
To what extent do you agree?
As a matter of fact, in some nations the proportion of crimes is rising; therefore they conceived an idea that the most effective method for coping with offences is to assign more police forces on the streets. Personally, I am a proponent of this standpoint for some reason.
To commence with, when there are more officials of law on the streets, residents will be more conscious of what they intend to commit, especially illicit activities. Criminal-oriented behaviour can be hindered because some individuals evoke a feeling of being caught and captured during the course of their action. Obviously, they cannot cover or conceal their apparent wrongdoings immediately. Thanks to that fear, the solution proposed become effective.
Another reason for this modification is concerning the swift reaction and strict observation from the authority. More police forces in the area means the reaction will be facilitated to some extent. Whenever a criminal case such as robbery, accidents or murders, is reported, the cops will approach the site faster and handle it at once, even before the offence has formed. For instance, now that numerous traffic accidents happen because of drunk drivers, many policemen and women have been placed adjacent to some boozing areas to prevent repercussions or grievous accidents induced by those who drank recently. Perhaps people do not let them involve in such cases regarding laws or regulations after facing it once or with the more intense density of cops, it is more difficult for an offender to escape from the criminal site.
To conclude, crime rates are experienceing an increase in different countries, which become one of the most complicated challenges to tackle. Thus, placing a considerable number of police forces in plenty of corners seems feasible to positively change the situation as they can have moderate influences on the citizens who possibly perpetrate offences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, as for, as to, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31803278689 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86603139985 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649180327869 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6857649071 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213691549671 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638079495183 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599488237046 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119633604654 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326482464269 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.