Some countries are struggling with increase in the rate of crime .many people think that having more police on the streets is only way to reduce crime .To what extent do you agree ?
Few Nations are competing with the rise in the ratio of crime . majority of mobs believe that hiring more police force on the road and streets is the best method to control the crime I partially agree with this notion and discuss some relevant reasons along with conclusion in my upcoming paragraphs
To commence with, there are multifarious reasons why should rise the law in the roads. First reason is that by rising the quantity of police, then the voilent activities are to be prevent from beginning. as a result, dwellers cannot a face the various type of criminal activities like a murder snatching kidnapping and many others. Moreover when the security force are for away from the residential regions citizens takev a long time to report .which outcome law do not able to find the criminal and proof due to this they do not control the crime quickly
On the other hand, it has many other method for reducing the crime rate. Firstly with the help of cctv cameras facilities, villian always feel fear before commit misdeed. secondly management should held the campus in the whole corner of the world for the awareness about the prevent from crime. lastly government must provide the lucrative education as well as job opportunities which leads they do not indulge in the adverse company for attaining their basic necessities
To conclude, considering all the points I restate that there is no doubt rising the rate of having more police force in the every place is more important for the nation. however without CCTV facilities and awareness it is not be possible
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, no doubt, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86194029851 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4702203627 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.397872513 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.777777778 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7777777778 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230796329496 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762231029555 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651124383006 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135386663261 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588051749606 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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