Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree?
These days, more and more countries are trying to decrease crime rate. It has been suggested that regulating the police number on the street could be solved increasing crime rate. I partially disagree with this phenomenon and in this essay, I will provide some arguments to support my opinion.
Generally speaking, there are a wide range of reason why people believe that this number of police who are working on the street can help to reduce crime rate. The primary argument supporting this idea is that it will be easy to control guilty in public place. If people who commit a crime know that police are following them on the street, it is highly unlikely that they don’t make any crime because they will catch up easily by police.
However, it must be said there are several arguments against the idea that working of more police on the street is not the one way to solve this problem. Perhaps the strongest of these is that education can be helpful to decrease the ratio of crime. If any person get good education that, the commit a crime is horrible behavior, these person will not make any fault in the society. Another key argument in support this idea is that government should be focus to resources of the crime. The result of these implementations is that source of crime decrease, which in turn lead to less crime in the future.
In a conclusion, rising crime rate is a topic which very relevant to modern society. However, I feel that best way to solve this issue is finding to source of crime and giving good education to people. If governments carry out these policies, it will provide a better life for future generations.
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Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
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Message: Did you mean 'focused', 'focussed'?
Suggestion: focused; focussed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68275862069 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42651818199 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503448275862 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.753408311 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267339302314 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101874607056 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701247586167 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18045237297 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060135908968 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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