Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates. Some believe that having more police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is argued by many that accelerating crime rates can be significantly reduced if the number of police on the streets is enhanced. From my own perspective, I partly disagree with this sentiment because sweeping education is validated to be more efficacious than increasing police force.
On the one hand, it is irrefutably that expanded army is exceedingly effective in controlling and curbing immoral behaviors as, apparently enough, since time immemorial police have been the pivotal force in combating criminal. Therefore, whereby reinforcing number of officers can considerably deter people from committing crime as the chances of getting caught red-handed is presumably higher. For example, the government of Belgium has strengthened the army force to counter terrorism.
On the other hand, notwithstanding acknowledge efficacy of police in contending with law infraction, inculcating social responsibility via educating is sufficiently obvious to be much more effectual. It is commonsensical knowledge that human’s demeanor is regulated by deep-rooted notions about the surrounding environment. To illustrate, if a child was early taught that lying is unacceptable, that kid will not as likely to tell a lie as who wasn’t. Likewise, via massive-scaled campaigns organized at national level to propagate opposition towards law infringement, such heinous crime will be greatly decreased. For instance, the Switzerland has almost no army and still it has negligible criminal activity due to the educated populace.
In conclusion, despite positive impact of enhancing police force, this movement pales into comparison with educating inhabitants about law and criminal sanctions. Government should, therefore join hand with academic institutions and local authorities to further disseminate legislation.
- People nowadays tend to have children at older ages Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 90
- The bar chart illustrates the number of people in the UK eating more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish per day Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 59
- Shopping habits depend more on your age group than anything else To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people think employers should not care about the way their employees dress but the quality at work To what extent you agree or disagree 84
- Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds All levels of education from primary school to tertiary education should be free To what extent do you agree or disagree 79
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, likewise, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92803030303 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36614148796 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685606060606 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9915664442 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157033153967 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495084950684 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527492095121 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958561855591 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657841133473 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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