Nowadays, some people feel extremely delighted as they can live in a peaceful and modern world while some countries are complaining about the alarmingly overweight condition which leads to a severe decrease in health and fitness level. Personally, I suppose that unhealthy lifestyle and people’s attitude towards their health are the 3 main contributors to this condition. Subsequently, the most effective solution for solving this problem is to focus on the inducements.
For starters, I believe that a sedentary lifestyle and people’s awareness are the most compelling reasons explaining obesity in some nations. Firstly, in our modern world, there are a plethora of facilities that help you deal with your problems including physical stuff. On the positive side, the task can be done more quickly and effectively, however, these facilities make people lazy and dependent. For example, back more than a decade, Vietnamese people used to commute to work by bicycles or on foot instead of driving motorbikes or cars as now, then, on the negative side, Vietnamese people gradually depend on motor vehicles rather than physical ones.
Secondly, the other contributor to obesity and the decline of the health level in some countries is the residents’ consciousness of health. Currently, there is a great number of speeches that encourage people to enjoy their life freely and dynamically by doing whatever they desire. Once again, if this quote is misunderstood, it will incentivize people to live an uncontrolled life including abandon their health with unhealthy food and drinks, and also without essential health check-up. Therefore, these two main reasons are the most convincing answers for low health level in some countries.
According to these causes, there are some practical measures that we should take to reduce the average weight and also to enhance the citizens' health. Firstly, journalism and mass communication should pay attention to public health, that they should broadcast some daily bulletin alarming the dangerous effects of obesity, unhealthy food and lifestyle. Secondly, some social organizations should arrange some kind of ‘green activities’ such as an ‘Earth-week’ when people walk or ride bikes to work. Finally, the most significant measure comes from the human attitude towards their health. In other words, each person should listen to their bodies and treat them scientifically by reducing sugary intake and doing daily workout with friends and families.
In conclusion, overweight condition with an unhealthy level increasing is damaging a vast majority of the world population which is caused by unhealthy absorption, lifestyle and personal awareness. Therefore, some visible solutions to this problem would be for journalists, activists to fulfil their mission, and for the human to take good care to their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
... average weight and also to enhance the citizens health. Firstly, journalism and mass co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2427.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 441.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50340136054 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91609272013 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553287981859 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3290167768 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29243511313 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870298742872 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393081685868 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157737470167 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401187317928 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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