In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
As technology is making advancements everyday, man has started showing negligence about his fitness and well being.In many countries the health of the population ,irrespective of the age, is declining due to a gradual increase in the body weight leading to multiple life threatening conditions. Various causes of this change in health are in following paragraphs.
Alterations in eating habits with increasing popularity of high caloric food items especially among the younger generations is one of the leading cause of deteriorating health. The culprit of this rise in popularity is many tempting food commercials displayed on the television. As a result of this, use of processed and genetically modified food that is extremely rich in cholesterol, triglycerides, with dozens of harmful artificial additives, has drastically increased. Caloric intake is more than required by human body and as a result the body mass index of people is increasing. To make the problem even worse, people have adapted sedentary lifestyle. They avoid physical activities as lots of facilities are easily available due to advanced technology. This has led to storage of all the fatty food in the form of fat in the body ultimately making people obese and chubby. Recently WHO has declared obesity as a separate medical condition because individuals are becoming victim of its drastic effects like cardiovascular disorders.
This problem can be controlled if handled carefully in initial stages. It is required to educate everyone about nutrition and normal caloric requirement of the body to make sure they eat healthy. Strict legislation on TV advertisements by the government must be ensured to ban the advertisements promoting unhealthy food and eating habits. Along with this,prompting proper lifestyle modification by popularizing means of transportation which requires and encourage human effort should be made.
In conclusion, its is necessary to promote proper nutritious diet by mass media to increase the fitness and improve healthy living. Changing the lifestyle by making oneself more mobile can help prevent from obesity and save lives in long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: every day
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Suggestion: , prompting
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49096385542 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13363482606 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611445783133 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6594213631 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.9375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105631445602 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340024819467 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333124039219 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662989197218 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325790502857 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.