In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Express your view in an essay of about 300- 350 words.
Every parent is in the need of adequate knowledge and skills that can help nurture their kids effectively. The foundation of a successful child raising plan depends on developing first stepping stones of a good manner; therefore, the idea of whether we should let our children have the full control of their lives or to employ a set of regulation for their demeanors is highly debatable among people. In this essay, I will discuss both views on the matter before reaching a concrete decision.
To begin with, it goes without saying that a decent idiosyncrasy is vital for a child upbringing. This means that from a tender age, children should be taught about some basic social behaviors such as greetings or showing respect towards elders. Not only those courteous etiquette can facilitate the modest side of a child characteristic, but also lay the foundation for a virtuous civil in the future. Hence, the outcome of strict rule imposition is relatively desirable if parents know how to get their kids fully engaged into the building course and wholeheartedly show them the appropriate solutions for any adversities that they may encounter during their lifetime.
Nevertheless, the concept of parents insisting on demand their children behave properly is a recipe for disaster. It is important to understand that too much restrictions can eventually lead to hatred and rebellion. Kids would no longer want to listen to anyone and become selfish, rude and undisciplined as a way to show their objections to their parents. Mischievous behaviors, if not completely conquered, will sow the seeds for social evils, who are the main causes of a deteriorated society. It is not strange to see cases of young adults committing crimes or using drugs as a result of over controlling parents. Therefore, it would be more beneficial to help your children develop an optimistic mindset towards learning new things instead of snowing them under a myriad of rules and expect them to abide by.
In conclusion, raising a child is a demanding task for every parent, which require a lot of efforts and consistency. From my perspective, I firmly hold the belief that in order to bring up a successful individual, we need to find the equilibrium between strict rules and grounds for dependency. The more parents take into serious account both the idea of setting up rules and allowing children to voice their opinions and pursue their goals, the more likely children can be absolutely developed and equipped for their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... of rules and expect them to abide by. In conclusion, raising a child is a dema...
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...eveloped and equipped for their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05301204819 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85367136634 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597590361446 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7526150055 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0625 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138787072345 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383501593584 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400154366032 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845626454344 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119616347893 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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