In some countries, children under 16 are not allowed to leave school by law and get full-time work. Is it good or bad?
In some countries, teenagers are forced to be in school during official working hours, as endorsed by the country law. They have to fulfil the assigned tasks during that period. With some reservations, I suppose this action is very fruitful for their future.
First of all, the teenage mind is almost empty and ready to accept new things very easily. They have strong picking power. Apart from parents, it is the responsibility of the state and education department also to nurture the school students. This age of life is very important. At this point in time, any desired mentality of a boy/girl can be obtained. During adultery, a complete shift is almost impossible.
Moreover, reading is much needed to become a successful scientist or researcher. So, a fulltime study-oriented environment can make the students a habitual reader. Due to this, children will be more focused on their studies and will not take care of the negatives of society. As a result, a bright generation will come into existence.
While on the other side, a child mind is very delicate and will be affected badly by consistent work. Other than studies, they need more time to enjoy teenage life. I think children should be free of responsibilities. Otherwise, they will become the victim of extra pressure and their growth of brain and body will be severely damaged.
To sum up, I suppose the study environment is the prime requirement of an exemplary society, but unnecessary stress can hurt the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, i suppose, i think, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99196787149 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82644770554 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1002440415 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0555555556 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117694203114 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326658584198 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515082749346 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636349603352 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485683788596 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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