In some countries the number of people who visit art galleries is declining. What are the reasons for this?
How can we solve this problem?
In some countries decrement is observed in art gallery visitors. To my mind various factors are damaging the glamor of art gallery need to be addressed .
Firstly , governments negligence is responsible for this debacle. Most of the countries are investing in science and technology , leaving behind arts and culture. Secondly , due to technology , worth of sketching is going down. Computers and other software are generating best graphics as a result people are losing interests in arts. Moreover , due to lack of interests mostly visitors like to go to dancing clubs , musical nights and some like to explore natural beauty. Another important reason is busy schedules .As everyone is busy in earning money as much as possible . So, when they get free , they prefer to visit places according to personnel liking.
There are many ways to promote art. To nurture the importance of art , it should be included in school syllabus .By this way art culture can be inculcated in younger generation mind. Moreover, in recent world there is no appreciation for artists. Young people will show interests when they have heroes and then many tourists can be attracted. A suitable location also plays vital role .By the opening of food markets and other shopping mall can attract more visitors. Also, there should be some sponsored events to highlight the importance of art galleries. Finally , by reducing working hours and giving some leisure time to people will help this cause.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13389121339 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6631980775 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652719665272 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3912398461 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.6875 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9375 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247535222531 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727695905636 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542778645527 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158997516026 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257617021367 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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