In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is greater than in the past. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is sometimes suggested that in certain in the past the change in age among close relatives and adolescents is smaller than in the present. I believe that the benefits of big difference in time far overweigh its drawbacks because blood relatives might share with their big experience during their life. This essay will first discuss the potential advantages of communication between parents and kids as the main benefit of big difference followed by an analysis of the major drawback which is the possible problem, like nonprofessional parents.
One of the principal advantages of age, which is more than normal is very kind parents. This is because it is a golden opportunity to communicate with old parents, who respect you everywhere and might purchase you something useful. As a result lack of kids are happily to have this parents with good relationship. For example, according to recent research of Harvard University indicates that old parents are more likely than young relatives in the long run.
The major disadvantage closely associated with problems with study at the College is tiny time to devote this for their children. Admittedly, lack of young relatives during their communication with children are studying at the University. A prime example is Kazakhstan, where many families are tiny young, thus many blood relatives are not able to bring up their adolescents due to lack of time.
In conclusion, I believe that old relative’s experience and kindly clearly outweighs the flawed argument that young parents cannot educate their kids as normal as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... present. I believe that the benefits of big difference in time far overweigh its...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd might purchase you something useful. As a result lack of kids are happily to ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2431372549 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90516516248 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560784313725 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3558322894 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.545454545 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187107822093 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731385249512 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396769832089 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106329891327 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494010602756 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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