In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
I definitely believe that there will be more benefits than drawbacks after businesses build their factories in the countryside. The expenditure and pollution will be the main advantages that I think will bring after moving industries to the downtown. However, the infrastructure and transportation will be a problem that needs to be solved.
Foregoing, the high expenditure can keep industries from making more money. To everyone's knowledge, big cities can always cost more to remain the survival of the manufacturing plant. Due to the ingredients being more expensive and the prices of the land being really costly. Additionally, factories can always impact the environment. For instance, polluted water or chemicals can break the biodiversity of the cities. Thus, to forestall this kind of phenomenon, they should move outside the cities.
However, there are also some issues that businesses will face when they move to the country. The transportation will definitely be inconvenient as inside the cities and they will need to spend more to deliver their goods to customers. Whatmore is that the infrastructure is not as widespread as inside the cities. This will bring businesses inconveniece to manufacture their product. All these problems might cause industries to have no will to change their location.
In conclusion, high costs and harming the environment are more serious for the citizens. Even though businesses need to make money, they still need to consider the welfare of society, not only themselves. For all these reasons, I definitely believe that governments should encourage industries to move outside the cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, so, still, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41568627451 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05683696174 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525490196078 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9461435791 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2352941176 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155358413492 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519319210429 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565969541619 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962806937795 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229558757105 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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