In a number of countries, there is an increase in the percentage of juvenile crimes. From my point of view, there are several reasons behind this situation, and some practical solutions should be implemented to such a problem.
The growth in youth crimes rate is attributed to various reasons. To begin with, teenagers who lack the care of their parents can become potential criminals. During the period of puberty, parents need to pay more attention to their children because teenagers do not have awareness of the good and bad aspects of a specific problem at this stage; however, in modern society, many parents are stuck in the hustle and bustle of work and do not have enough time to care their children. As a result, young people are at risk of being affected by negative things when they accidentally come into contact with the social evils such as drug smuggling or murder. In addition, surroundings have a huge effect on the juvenile. If adolescents live in a violent environment or experience frequent domestic violence as children, they are likely to suffer from some psychological disorders. These disorders contribute significantly to their criminal path.
Fortunately, there are some measures that can be taken by both parents and the government to solve this tendency. Firstly, parents should spend a lot of time with their children to talk to them like friends. By talking with teens, parents can gain a deeper understanding of what their child really needs and empathize with their feelings during a rebellious period. At the same time, they can offer many helpful tips to guide the juvenile into becoming a good citizen. In terms of government, the situation of domestic violence needs to be thoroughly solved with severe punishments to prevent the psychological damage of the victims, especially teenagers.
To conclude, the underlying reasons for the juvenile rate’s growth are varied. There are various methods available that can be carried out by not only the government but also parents to improve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11377245509 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78861317518 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577844311377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9539629343 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193988846925 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604376745411 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056229094652 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121305336942 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253411635184 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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