In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In today’s era, there is an increasing trend of eating much fast food. Most of the folks are suffering from different health problems due to excessive consumption of fast food. From my point of view, I would strongly agree with the governments to implement higher tax on fast food. This essay will examine the reasons to my statement.
On one hand, nowadays, people are too busy in their works and have less time for cooking foods. so, they tend to buy fast foods. This is the reason why people nowadays suffer from different health problems such as Obesity. Similarly, people have gained the weight due to such foods. Moreover, these foods are really unhealthy and can lead to several health problems. For instance, people are attracted towards fast food due to their busy schedule. As per the recent studies, it has shown that people of UK and India are suffering from the problems of obesity the most. This is one of the consequences of fast food consumption.
On the other hand, several health problem such as respiratory problem, heart problem and kidney problem arise due to the consumption of unhealthy fast foods. These health problems can be reduced if government impose a greater tax to those fast foods. In addition to this, people will stop buying such foods and prepare their own homemade foods. Moreover, this will help the government to uplift the economic status of the country. Furthermore, there will be a dramatic change in the consumption of other packaging junk foods and people will be more concerned about their health.
In conclusion, there will be less number of people consuming fast food due to the rise in tax. However, this might not only be the reason to stop people consuming fast foods. There can be other solutions for these problems like awareness program among the people, encouraging restaurants to impose the quality of the fast food and so on. In addition to this, Governments should have crucial role to pay attention towards the citizen’s health and the foods they consume.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...s and have less time for cooking foods. so, they tend to buy fast foods. This is t...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some health'.
Suggestion: some health
...food consumption. On the other hand, several health problem such as respiratory problem, he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, similarly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95029239766 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55019209142 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479532163743 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2550100227 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.619047619 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360027562903 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121751103198 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603834127875 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252241411702 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561763400519 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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