In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, in some parts of world most of the people are addicted towards the fast foods which have affected health of people causing different fatal and chronic diseases. I strongly agree that concerned authorities and governments should increase the tax rate in such types of foods. This essay will discuss the effects of fast foods and responsibility of government.
To begin with, in today's world, most of the people are busy with their works and spend more time on jobs and duties. So, they prefer to eat fast foods in restaurants rather than spending hours on cooking. However, they are unknown about its consequences in their health. Although, fast foods require less time to prepare but they are really very low in nutrition which have badly affected health of people. For instance, pizzas and burger are loved by many people but these foods have caused various diseases such as obesity which has become most common disease these days. In addition to this, high amount of cholesterol in blood is found due to consuming foods that are fatty and oily.
It is evident that the survey conducted in America has announced most of the people are suffering from heart diseases and problems in digestive system. Moreover, it was found the adults are mostly affected by eating fast foods. Furthermore, in children different diseases have been discovered due to the addiction towards fast foods.
In conclusion, government has a crucial role in reducing the consequences created by the fast foods. One of the best way is to impose a higher tax on this kind of food so that people will be forced to eat homemade and healthy foods. I strongly believe that it is not only the responsibility of government but the people themselves should be concerned about their health. From my point of view, governments should conduct awareness programs to make their citizens aware of different issues created by having fast foods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98442367601 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55170805203 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538940809969 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7788863306 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261962602042 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864657591265 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488317434362 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165301398783 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480789321564 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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