In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The people are suffering from the major health issues by consuming too much fast food is the biggest problem for some countries. this is argue by many of people that for decreasing the rate of buying fast foods by the people, government needs to impose a higher taxes over this kind of food. These means that the higher cost of food will make an impact on the purachasing powers and so people moved towards lower prices of foods & healthy diet.
The changing demands, lifestyle and incomes of the people leads to extention of growing stimulation for using and bringing the unhealthier things too. In this instance, the people who want to eat and try the different taste of the food which is healthier for them or not, doesn't care about spending high amount of money. they do not think much for taking burger, Pizzas and other drinking items because they're not aware about their own life and they only foccused for starvation. Furthermore, it also includes the number of childrens who have no idea for which type of food they need to eat and in which quantity. so they buy whatever they want. Parents are also responsible for it because they do not understand effects of frequently consuming unhealthier foods.
On the other hand, the Impositioning of higher taxes means governement have to face the opposition from the public for payih higher money and it creates higher rate of disputes between them. But on the positive side of this law, make a good impact in people lives and pushing them forward for eating vegans. The rate of serious health problems get onto the downfall which improves directly the overall level of GDP of a country.
In my point of view, I believe that the impose of higher taxes on some of this type of foods is necessary, so people acknowledge the meaning of healthy lifestyle. while consuming as little as much is doing great work for any group of age of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72289156627 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40744590714 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6747953572 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398790629189 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133876273893 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104510018789 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24745933171 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122135340389 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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