In some countries , it is now possible for people to buy products made in other countries . To what extent do the benefits of this development outweight the problems?
Nowdays ， with the trend of globalization ， the international goods are easily accessible for people in some countries . I argue that this development has great impact on people's daily life .
Firstly ， people are able to buy various products at a lower price. International trade enhance the competition between different manufactures , which means to attract consumers they have to decrease the prices . Thus the consumers might get benefits from these price competitions . Meanwhile , people have more chances to purchase different products to experience various cultures . For example , people can get kinds of food imported from other countries at their local supermarkets.
Furthermore , the development of international trade can also contribute to the economic improvements. For exporting countries , the climbing demand of products would create more employment opportunities , which might be helpful to drop the poverty rate . Their manufacture industry and other industries , including transport industry and agriculture industry could have promising prospects. For the importing countries , the import tax might enable the governments to rise their tax revenue.
On the other hand , we should recognise that this developing international trade may cause consumerism , which means our society is likely to become throw-away society. This trend could change people's cosuming pattern and make them be addicted to buying unnecessary things. From long-term aspect , this may also lead to devastating pollutions in the future .
In conclusion , the enhancement of international trade is effective in improving the quality of people's daily life , although there is potential issue , such as environmental damages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91967871486 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19546145915 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622489959839 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9866006097 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254455008868 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823238583863 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546150868073 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134189657702 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671632630057 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.76 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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