The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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this bar chart demonstrates the overall amou...
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...he UK residence spent on telephone calls,during 1995 to 2002.These calls were consist o...
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...ls,during 1995 to 2002.These calls were consist of three types,the local call,the natio...
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...re consist of three types,the local call,the national and international call and the...
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...the total time in the eight years shown.One interesting phenomenon is that,after ei...
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...shown.One interesting phenomenon is that,after eight years,the British people spent mo...
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...ing phenomenon is that,after eight years,the British people spent more time on havin...
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...e spent more time on having phone calls.In 1995,they spent almost 110 billion minu...
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...early 60 billion. During this period,people had changed a lot in their calling way....
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... had changed a lot in their calling way.For example,the time of mobile call saw a d...
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...d a lot in their calling way.For example,the time of mobile call saw a dramatic deve...
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...f mobile call saw a dramatic development,from less than 10 billion to nearly 40 billi...
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...ss than 10 billion to nearly 40 billion.Although people tend to use the local call as th...
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...o use the local call as the usual choice,there was a slight decrease happened in 1999,...
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...1999,just after the peak of local calls.In contrast,the figure of national and int...
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...fter the peak of local calls.In contrast,the figure of national and international ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, for example, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16851845381 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675324675325 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7598108282 43.030603864 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 282.333333333 112.824112599 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.3333333333 22.9334400587 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17755307975 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129497141251 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374716941876 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129497141251 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374716941876 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.1 13.2329268293 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 61.2550243902 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.3012195122 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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