In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
There is no denial that the emergence of one person household becoming the norm,gradually substitutes family sized accommodation, particularly in prosperous nations. In this circumstance, it is my firm conviction that this trend seems to bring about both advantages and drawbacks to individuals and national economic.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why residents are now in favour of living alone, which produces positive results not only for citizen but also for community. In terms of individual level, one of the most primary contributors is that this is a great chance for people to improve their prospects and reach their potential while living far away from family members. It is no wonder that teenagers at the age above eighteen who grasp a oppotunity to live alone are more independent and have an ability to manage every single aspects of life on their own from personal timetable to economy. Moreover, another crucial factor is that there will be no invasion in privacy or curtailment in freedom which help people to enjoy blissful moments. Regarding to society, in order to meet the demand of accommodation, there will be room for construction industry to experience a ground shaking development as well as other related services.
Despite a plentiful of advantages I expressed above, there are several demerits halting people from living alone. It is sensible that without any relatives and family members, people would have a feeling of being alone and isolated from surrounded community. Moreover, when facing a problem,it is a daunted task to tackle with no help from senior generation, for instance, taking care of children, repairing items and so on especially in sedentary lifestyle as modern days. Considering another aspect of community, the uncontrolled increase in household demand will lead to severe burdens such as exorbitant rent and lacking of accommodation.
In conclusion, living alone will have both beneficial and drawback to society and citizen, so that to make a prudent choice, people should consider carefully.
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Suggestion: , gradually
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2987804878 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95665066668 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615853658537 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.4644601681 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.833333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127236272634 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455814693954 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314946582014 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756489513162 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279319528985 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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