In some countries many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past do you think this is positive or negative development

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In some countries many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.do you think this is positive or negative development.

Living solo is a common trend these days which is opted by myriad number of people in certain nations. While It has some negative effects, i assert that it cast a positive impact regarding financial independence and privacy.

Firstly people who choose to live alone are become financially independent. This is simply because in this situation they have to pay various types of bills by their own ranging from accommodation, grocery to electricity etcetera, consequently; it makes them self sustaining about their life and responsibilities. For instance, juveniles who go to abroad for their higher studies are become self-sufficient at their early age and their parents are free from duties of their children, whereas in the past guardians was indulge in taking care of their child since their childhood to their marital life. In short personals who opted to stay solo become mature enough to run their life by their own.

Secondly, privacy is an additional benefit which favour the above opinion. Usually in ancient times people live in joint families, where their decision is affected by their counterparts, which is not happened in staying single or in nuclear families. Now in sophisticated scenario if masses want to plan holidays or accommodate some facilities, they will free by their choices without any interference. Thus, this perception protect the private life and independent decisions of a person.

In conclusion, even though staying single has some cons, its pros like self-reliant and protection of personal life are greater than anything else.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30522088353 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90930524891 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8114009566 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.090909091 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118035583627 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559035607094 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531773895954 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792500648218 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324150580312 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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