In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner.
Discuss both systems and state which one do you think is better.
Marriage is a socially or ritually recognised union between two genders that establishes rights and obligations between those spouses which was generally arranged by the caretakers in ancient time however, the trend of love marriage has emerged in many societies . The benefits of both ways of getting married would be discussed in further segments.
To begin with the benefits of arrange marriage, in such cases, partner is selected by parents or elders of family. Before selecting a life partner, all the traits of both genders are taken into account because having similarly in choices makes its easier to spend life with each other. Not only this, families'background, religious, culture are also considered in such cases as marriage is not only the Union of two genders but it is also the unity of two families and societies so, in difficult situations such as financial problems in new married couple's life or lose in business, both families can help each other.
Conversely, love marriages also have some merits. Like, in a relationship, both genders know each other's strengthens, weaknesses. Both bridge and groom accept each other with all that abilities . Moreover, getting married is a most important decision of individual's life therefore, in such cases, both genders may not blame others if something bad happens in life . However, sometimes, having love with each other may a misconception as it might be an attraction toward opposite gender but after marriage, the disrespect and misunderstanding may spoil the relationship which may end with divorce.
After having a great deal of discussion on both notions, it is decided that arrange marriages are better because of having huge experience of parents but if someone really has any lover then before taking the decision of getting married, one must be able to bear all the responsibilities to make married life successful
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, may, moreover, really, similarly, so, then, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24671052632 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92704677778 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559210526316 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.614607361 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214870624984 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893531587443 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357217113897 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136351877398 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114388384826 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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