In some countries, men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
It is true that more and more spouses defer their parenthood until they reach middle age, more or less. There are some reasons as well as adverse effects on this trend.
There are some causes explaining why maternal age at childbirth is a preferable choice. The bottom line is many would-be-parents have a tendency to pursue their personal desire. Nowadays, spouses in dual-income families incline to be engaged with work with the aim of prosperous career prospects. Having pregnancy at early ages, women have to sacrifice their future and delicate most of their time taking care of the newborn. In addition, an increasing cost of raising a child is also considered as hindrance making many married couples having children late, especially in major cities. It is undoubted that spouses need a good financial base to nurture their offspring, such as providing sufficient nourishment and education.
Result in several adverse effects on both society and family life. As to old parents, if females give birth to their kids at a late age congenital anomalies, it is likely that their children suffer from genetic disorder or chromosome problems. In many cases, disabled children are born by virtue of their parents’ pure selfishness, which can place a burden on both family life and society. Moreover, an aging society can stem from this trend. While the number of senior citizens stably increases, a falling birth rate cannot make up for the vacancies left by retired people. This finally can cause a lack of workforce in the future.
In conclusion, according to many effects described above, I believe that this development should be constrained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in many cases, it is true, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22676579926 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76794696163 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650557620818 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7292106111 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225998056538 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734599452109 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665049426224 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120000722356 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388987632492 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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