In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life.
What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
Traditionally, people raise children in the age of twenties. However, people in today’s modern society are having children increasingly late. It is necessary to explore the reasons behind this trend and analyze the problems caused by this change.
High living cost is the root cause to late childbirth, making married people be busy with working. Living cost including high food prices and unaffordable houses, if soaring rapidly, focuses people to keep working continuously. Only in this way can they maintain their own basic life needs, not to mention that they have extra money and time to raise children. Therefor, living in this stressful social situation, it s widely believed that having children is not a good idea for people when they can only afford their own living.
Having children late may cause the falling of population of children, which can have a negative effect on the social development. The phenomenon of childlessness cause by the problem of late childbirth means that there will not be enough young people who can take over the jobs that today’s the young are doing when they retire. As a result, the whole society cannot be maintained as usual when no young people to finish some certain works.
Moreover, having children late can have negative impact on the growth of children, thus making parents spend more time and effort to take care of them. If women give birth to their children late, their children may not develop as strongly and healthily as their children who are born early when their mothers are much younger. Therefore, their parents have to spare more effort and time to look after them in order to ensure children’s healthy growth.
To sum up, living under the situation of high living stress is responsible for the late childbirth and this changes not only bring negative to the whole society but also to people’s family life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g negative to the whole society but also to people's family life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07961783439 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58547930438 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53821656051 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4023135325 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.928571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240606366014 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891488171077 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539989157926 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142215531432 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227922195883 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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