Among the numerous decisions made by adults, moving out is not the easiest. Many choose not to, resulting in advantages that greatly outweigh the disadvantages.
The first disadvantage relates to the ability to attain independence. Although it seems irrelevant whether or not the adult lives with their parents, it appears to be the opposite in practice. Many adults continue to live the life of a spoiled adolescent, which is understandable given that humans and animals do not alter their behavior if there is no interference. In addition, the problem becomes more complicated when the adult finds a lifelong partner who is unwilling to share the living space. Reasons can be as plausible as mismatched lifestyles, and it is only a matter of time before the decision to move is made; otherwise, someone will suffer.
However, there are advantages to living with one's parents, such as financial advantages. It is no longer practical to own a home, as real estate prices have reached their peak and will continue to rise as long as the world's population continues to grow. Sharing housing is something to consider, but it is not all that different from living with a family. The adult may also choose to spend more time with their parents and assist them in times of need. It is terrible to realize that there is so little time left, and if they wish to strengthen the family bond, living with them is preferable.
In conclusion, although not moving out may discourage independence and be problematic should a person find a spouse, the decision can help a person's finances and allow them to repay their parents' care and affection. Appropriate measures can be discussed and taken to mitigate these disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ependence. Although it seems irrelevant whether or not the adult lives with their parents, it ...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...er, there are advantages to living with ones parents, such as financial advantages. ...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...nd will continue to rise as long as the worlds population continues to grow. Sharing h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98257839721 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86782654522 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.189139235 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226488120492 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071631202336 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538113261328 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115345033416 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655153131149 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.