It is clear that more and more young adolescents, including many who have graduated or already have jobs, are unable or unwilling to leave home and make their own lives. While this trend has some benefits, from my perspective, the disadvantages seem to outweigh the advantages in this case.
On the one hand, choosing to live under one roof with parents offers a number of merits. First of all, it helps young people to save money when they do not have to allocate for rent, electricity or water. This savings can be used for emergencies such as illness or marriage. In addition, living with parents can help form stronger relationships among family members. For instance, after a busy working day, a newly graduate student can have dinner with his parents, discuss work problems and maybe get some advice.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of this trend too. Firstly, It hinders the independent development of young people. In the future, they need to live without parents because they will have a family or their parents will pass away so it is better to leave their parents’ house once they can earn enough income to pay the living expenses. Secondly, from the opinion of their parents, they may want more time for themselves, free of family responsibilities. After all, they have helped their children further their education, with the aim of putting their knowledge gained into practice and pursuing a successful career, so parents now deserve some time for themselves.
To sum up, though it is undeniable that living with parents can be advantageous because of saving money and improving relationships among family members, due to the loss of independence, it seems to be more disadvantageous.
- In some countries more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college University or even after finding a job Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 73
- In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals and society Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, after all, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78858862025 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.325764229 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31059695628 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102015686383 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551013549722 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185226823632 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494401013503 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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