In some countries, more and more people are buying imported food rather than buying food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What can be done to encourage people to buy locally produced food
In many countries, consist of Vietnam, many people like to buy imported food rather than local food. So, what are reasons for this problem? And how can we encourage people to buy locally produced food? There are some reasons and suggested solutions to tackle this problem.
The principal reason behind the increase of using imported food of the vast of majority of people is the high quality. Most of imported foods have been being tested and preserved carefully before approached that create the customer’s trust. In addition, the necessity of consumers is also a good reason. Many people earn more money nowadays, they want to buy something that is worth of money, so imported food seems to become their best choice as they default those foreign foods are best. Last but not least, one of the factors influencing on this problem is the rise of supermarket. People are living in the busy life; they often choose supermarket as convienent place to buy all of things. In those supermarkets, imported food are omnipresent wheather canned food, vegetables, seafood or meat... That lead to the decrease in local consumption.
Therefore, we need to find some solutions to change the consumers’ habit. Firstly, we should diversify all domestic products actively because the quality, model, and packaging can not be made no headway, this, can stimulate the consumers’ interest. Secondly, organic food should be debased. It can be regarded as the high-quality product in general psychology of comsumers but its price is more expensive than foreign goods sometimes. So, the question is: “why we have to buy local food or organic food when they are the same price as imported products?”. Last but not least, government should wage a campaign to “rescue domestic goods” because most of locally produced foods’ consumption rate are in low keep; farmers in local area are low-income earners, if Government helps them, they can have better life, moreover, this can be useful in country’s economic development.
In conclusion, people in both Vietnam and others countries tend to buy imported food because of being better quality, necessity, … so that, some solutions are carried out to raise the local food consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 798, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ned food, vegetables, seafood or meat…. that lead to the decrease in local consumpti...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'find'.
Suggestion: find
...al consumption. Therefore, we need to finds some solutions to change the consumers’...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...cause of being better quality, necessity,… so that, some solutions are carried ou...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e of being better quality, necessity,… so that, some solutions are carried out to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19722222222 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76283620377 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2815176382 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4736842105 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548341463128 0.244688304435 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168877632902 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156546244594 0.0667982634062 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.383677256813 0.151304729494 254% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806670108127 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 798, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ned food, vegetables, seafood or meat…. that lead to the decrease in local consumpti...
^^^^
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'find'.
Suggestion: find
...al consumption. Therefore, we need to finds some solutions to change the consumers’...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...cause of being better quality, necessity,… so that, some solutions are carried ou...
^^
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e of being better quality, necessity,… so that, some solutions are carried out to...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19722222222 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76283620377 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2815176382 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4736842105 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548341463128 0.244688304435 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168877632902 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156546244594 0.0667982634062 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.383677256813 0.151304729494 254% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806670108127 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.