In some countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In some countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present, some of countries's economy is becoming worse condition while certain countries are helping other one as a friend.
On the one hand, the Covid 19 infection not only affected one or two states but also took over the whole world. In addition to, this epidemic is having a huge negative impact on the economy and politics of many countries. That is why, states have to help each other as others are in need of help. For instance, today due to the dire situation in the United States, we can see that Russia has extended a helping hand to the USA and provided several different medical supplies. As well as, despite the current economic situation, Uzbekistan is delivering food and a number of necessary equipment to countries in need. According to the latest reports, we can know that Uzbekistan has sent humanitarian aid to Belarus in the fight against Covid 19.
On the other hand, at the same time, when the position of economy is decrising currently, every country should think more about their own people than about other one. While plenty of factories and plants have closed owing to quarantine, there may be a shortage of food and some medical instruments for patients and the populations. Therefore, each state must first pay attention to its economic problems and its people. Moreover, in this case, economic austerity must be pursued.
To sum up, I would like to say that, in such a difficult situation, countries must help each other both economically and morally when they have enough for themselves. Because, each country first of all must ensure its own state and population.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 441, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
... a helping hand to the USA and provided several different medical supplies. As well as, despite t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86446886447 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59488585944 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2388940446 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265424111013 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914931834454 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708640808058 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176915017034 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507377173052 0.056905535591 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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