In some countries, owning home rather than renting one is more important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?
In some nations, owning a house rather than renting it is a significant important for people. This essay will give the reason of this case, also it will express my opinion about the topic.
This case happens because most people need to feel that they have their own house as this make them feel happy and satisfied. I agreed that owning a house is more beneficial than renting one. Although you will pay much amount for buying a home, it will get more positive results for you as the following reasons.
First of all, buying a house considered as a big asset and long term investment, for instance, there is a story said, a guy was keep on saving a money for a long time of period to buy a small house, then after he bought it he sell it after one year with double price and this was the first step for his properties and real-estate career. After all we can notice that most people thus have their own houses, they were being wealthy after a period of time.
Secondly, Obtaining a new house will make you have a sense of fulfillment and satisfaction, for example, in Canada, when the government declined the cost of lands and houses in a specific provinces, the one who got the opportunity to buy they were extremely happy and productive in their life as per the survey prepared by the government. On the other hand, you will not need to pay every month a big amount of money on renting plus the municipality payments such as electricity and water usage.
In conclusion, I believe that owning a home will make you feel satisfied and will lead you to a brilliant investment in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
... a story said, a guy was keep on saving a money for a long time of period to buy a smal...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sells'.
Suggestion: sells
...small house, then after he bought it he sell it after one year with double price and...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...houses, they were being wealthy after a period of time. Secondly, Obtaining a new house wil...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'province'?
Suggestion: province
... cost of lands and houses in a specific provinces, the one who got the opportunity to buy...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...will lead you to a brilliant investment in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51379310345 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46759979565 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.0939847681 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.9 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295125593666 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131434671293 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718811253475 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175110347274 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105712613193 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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