In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?
People in some nations consider purchasing accommodation rather than renting one to be a vital factor in their lives. In my opinion, the feeling that owning a home gives people can give rise to this thought. This essay will explore the reasons why owning a home is so important to people and why this is a negative development.
I am convinced that having their own house will give some individuals the feeling that they belong to a certain location and people. When they live in a neighborhood for a long time, they become familiar with the location and get to know the community well. Whereas in a rental home, some people find it hard to feel “home” in the first place, as they know their stay is temporary. Even though they regard where they live as their home, if they were compelled to change it one day due to several reasons, some of they cannot leave all the friendship and habits established in former place.
I also believe that owning a home as an important factor is not a drawback unless it become a sign of wealth in a society. It is an undeniable fact that all around the world, there are many households who find it hard to afford to buy a house due to financial problems. Community’s attitude toward this trend may put too much pressure on the young generation who just started their independence life. They might be in a rush to achieve this goal and sacrificed vital things though this path.
In conclusion, the reason why having their own home become crucial for some people may be the fact that they tend to get used to all things related to their accommodation and neighborhood. Moreover, I believe that if this case becomes financially important, it can have several drawbacks to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...tant factor is not a drawback unless it become a sign of wealth in a society. It is an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67213114754 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62109360478 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3728281125 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30025520738 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116683412425 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899666464931 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208593142494 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124709702345 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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