It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose owning a house if it does not appeal to you at all. In my opinion, it’s a positive situation that owning a home is much more important than renting a house.
First of all, I believe that a house is a place where family have some precious moments and share emotional attachments with their place of living. That is why one’s own house is a place where they can live and even for their upcoming generations could value the lifestyle of their ancestors. For example, my grandfather’s father had constructed the house which I am living with my family today. Because of that, we had lot of valuable memories. And also, still we are respecting the traditional values which came from our ancestor times. That is why owning a house is more important to choose to live that makes you happy and more attachable with your family.
Secondly, owning a house keeps you away from additional payments which can be a burden to your lifestyle. In other words, rent can be often increased over many factors. For instance, one of my friends had to pay double the rent for her accommodation, because the neighbourhood was planning to build a supermarket and cinema complex in front of her house. Thus, advantages of owning a house outweigh the drawback of renting a house in a long-term perspective.
To conclude, I strongly believe that owning a house is more beneficial and create very positive situation than renting a home. Because it gives people more freedom and make them happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to own'.
Suggestion: to own
... that it is more advantageous to choose owning a house if it does not appeal to you at...
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Line 2, column 544, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...hich came from our ancestor times. That is why owning a house is more important to choose to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74531835206 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72618530123 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7531217418 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230371860864 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813758530936 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669064808936 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157593010582 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366450615459 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.