in some countries people of all ages group engaging into men's force or even exercising are there are more advantages of drawback to this development.
Gone are the days when the masses were not aware about physical fitness.This notion has gone undersea changes.even sense technology took place.In some countries masses has been participating in sports and physical activities. There are various merits and demerits.This essay shall elucidate the advantages and disadvantages for extra exercise in ensuing segments.
First and foremost,sports activities have numerous benefits Owing to this, people become a more strong and physically fit.To be more precise, as their fitness give them opportunity to win hazards competition.By this,they can contribute to grow their nation.For instance,In Australia peoples are more physically strong as they participate in Olympiad and various competitions.where they win medals like gold silver,which is helpful to grow their nation.Consequently,physical awareness helpful to increase the nation's reputation.Secondly, due to physically strong body, the people escaped the hazards disease such as obesity and anxiety.It is also fantastic method to reduce the stress.This is well known that 'In a sound body have sound mind' by this I mean,citizen contribute more to develop their nation.Thus,sports and exercising give a numerous benefit Not only individual but also the nation.
However there are few drawbacks for over exercise and sports Due to this,to become a physical fitness Government have to need to spend hafty amount of money to establish gyms and sports centre.It might be economically difficult for government if government invest halfty amount of money on on this definitely they will not invest money on the other aspect such as improved the poor people condition,poverty,education.It might be create unnecessary stress on government.Nevertheless,there are some difficulties for authority to arrange the equipment if the government invest money on this equipment definitely it will reduce the health charges.Not only this but also it will be helpful to reduce disease and medicine expenditure. Hence, drawbacks are less as comparative to benefit.
To recapitulate ,I vehemently voch that although, there are few negative aspect for exercising and sports activity yet the positive positive aspects are more out weight the drawbacks so people should become a more physically fit due to their various advantages.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-08-24 | sardarni kaur | 56 | view |
| 2020-08-24 | sardarni kaur | 68 | view |
- most of the elderly retired peoples moving to an other countries discuss the advantage and disadvantage 84
- some people says that educational success depend most of the time on having a good teachers others says that attitude of students also matter discuss both view and give your opinion 84
- people don t read newspapers or watch tv news but they rely on internet for news is it positive or negative development 56
- in these days in many countries fear and fewer people want to become teacher particularly in secondary school what are the reason for this and how could the problem solved give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge an 67
- In the future no one buy a printed newspaper or books because they able to read everything that they want online without payment To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Gone are the days when the masses were not aware...
^^^
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...s were not aware about physical fitness.This notion has gone undersea changes.even s...
^^^^
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...hanges.even sense technology took place.In some countries masses has been particip...
^^
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
.... There are various merits and demerits.This essay shall elucidate the advantages an...
^^^^
Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sports
...in ensuing segments. First and foremost,sports activities have numerous benefits Owing...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...become a more strong and physically fit.To be more precise, as their fitness give ...
^^
Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
... opportunity to win hazards competition.By this,they can contribute to grow their ...
^^
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...unity to win hazards competition.By this,they can contribute to grow their nation.For...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...hey can contribute to grow their nation.For instance,In Australia peoples are more...
^^^
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...ribute to grow their nation.For instance,In Australia peoples are more physically ...
^^^
Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on.For instance,In Australia peoples are more physically strong as they participa...
^^
Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...s.where they win medals like gold silver,which is helpful to grow their nation.Consequ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 453, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consequently
...r,which is helpful to grow their nation.Consequently,physical awareness helpful to increase ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , physical
...elpful to grow their nation.Consequently,physical awareness helpful to increase the natio...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 509, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...sical awareness helpful to increase the nations reputation.Secondly, due to physically ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...pful to increase the nations reputation.Secondly, due to physically strong body, the peo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 592, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hazards'' or 'hazard's'?
Suggestion: hazards'; hazard's
...lly strong body, the people escaped the hazards disease such as obesity and anxiety.It ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 636, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...rds disease such as obesity and anxiety.It is also fantastic method to reduce the ...
^^
Line 2, column 685, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...o fantastic method to reduce the stress.This is well known that In a sound body have...
^^^^
Line 2, column 755, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , citizen
...ound body have sound mind by this I mean,citizen contribute more to develop their nation...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 804, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...contribute more to develop their nation.Thus,sports and exercising give a numerous b...
^^^^
Line 2, column 808, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sports
...ribute more to develop their nation.Thus,sports and exercising give a numerous benefit ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 883, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ous benefit Not only individual but also the nation. However there are few drawb...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... only individual but also the nation. However there are few drawbacks for over exerci...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...for over exercise and sports Due to this,to become a physical fitness Government ha...
^^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...to become a physical fitness Government have to need to spend hafty amount of money ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt of money to establish gyms and sports centre.It might be economically difficul...
^^
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ey to establish gyms and sports centre.It might be economically difficult for gov...
^^
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r government if government invest halfty amount of money on on this definitely th...
^^
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: on
...vernment invest halfty amount of money on on this definitely they will not invest mo...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , poverty
...ch as improved the poor people condition,poverty,education.It might be create unnecessar...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...poor people condition,poverty,education.It might be create unnecessary stress on g...
^^
Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...create unnecessary stress on government.Nevertheless,there are some difficulties for authori...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...essary stress on government.Nevertheless,there are some difficulties for authority to ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
...itely it will reduce the health charges.Not only this but also it will be helpful t...
^^^
Line 3, column 757, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... expenditure. Hence, drawbacks are less as comparative to benefit. To recapitulat...
^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...comparative to benefit. To recapitulate ,I vehemently voch that although, there a...
^^
Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'aspects'?
Suggestion: aspects
...h that although, there are few negative aspect for exercising and sports activity yet ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: positive
... exercising and sports activity yet the positive positive aspects are more out weight the drawbac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7514619883 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8664800884 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538011695906 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 314.510598656 49.4020404114 637% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 327.833333333 106.682146367 307% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 20.7667163134 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.5 7.06120827912 304% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177180567249 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853309710924 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222251785202 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105231872697 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00933046983268 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.2 13.0946893788 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.76 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.1 11.3001002004 258% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.96 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.