IN SOME COUNTRIES, PEOPLE ARE NOT TAKING CARE OF THEIR ELDERLY RELATIVES, SOME BELIEVE THAT THE ELDERLY PEOPLE SHOULD LIVE IN NURSING HOME WHERE TRAINED PROFESSIONAL CARE For THE ELDERLY, OTHERS THINK THEY SHOULD LIVE WITH THE YOUNGER FAMILY MEMBERS. DISCUSS BOTH OF VIEWS AND GIVER YOUR OPINION.
Old people play the significant roles in modern society nowadays. However, the question of who will hold the responsibility of looking after the parents and grandparents when they get old is a heated debate. Meanwhile, the situation of putting senior citizens into nursing home is also a common situation in many households.
On the one hand, elderly people living in nursing homes is an alternative that brings about a lot of benefits. In these places, old people have more opportunities to communicate with their counterparts/ their peers. With each other’s company, these old people do not feel lonely and can also do a great deal of things together, such as exchanging memories of their time. Besides, the most important benefit is that old people can receive professional medical care from professional doctor. In contrast, at homes, due to busyness, their children cannot look after them.
On the other hand, however, a great proportion of population hold the belief that it is the responsibility of offspring to look after their parents and grandparents when these people get old and grey. In actual fact, old people are treasure of society. Old people can make use of their expertise and wisdom to teach children how to differentiate between good and bad, right and wrong. Besides, it is a luck for the children to have chances to share house with the elderly relatives to repay what these people have received. This is not to mention the usefulness of elderly people when they can do household chores, and volunteering.
In conclusion, from my point of view, it depends on the circumstance of each family to decide who to take care of the elderly relatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
... when these people get old and grey. In actual fact, old people are treasure of society. Ol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01075268817 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85924921485 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9249791013 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260144565442 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912070790636 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051699562323 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155716232835 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595661306549 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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