In some countries, some high school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time before going to university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of those school leavers' decision. Give your own opinion.
In some countries, students who just graduate are tending to get a job or go on trips for a period of time before university life. This option brings both benefits and drawbacks but I would argue that the benefits of taking a gap year will outweigh the repercussions.
Getting a job or traveling straight at a very young age can give students a number of unforgettable and priceless experiences that they can not receive at universities. Firstly, high school leavers will have chances to meet and work with other people with different perspectives and personalities from all around the world. Thus, it can provide students with communication and handling skills. Secondly, during a gap year, students can discover everything they want, also they will have more spare time to try short courses or temporary works that will enhance all life skills and then school leavers can clarify what they want to be in the future, which career might be right for them.
On the other hand, not going to university right after graduating has its own disadvantages. The expense is the most considering issues because no one can go anywhere without money - an indispensable thing. It depends on families' financial conditions so students have to think carefully whether they should gap year or not. In addition, getting a job with no qualifications or experiences is impossible while these two things are the most crucial factors if they want their CV to be accepted and it will be a very harsh time for them.
In conclusion, I do believe that this decision has lots of benefits but it brings some noticeable drawbacks as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90476190476 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84387140369 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8070103203 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.727272727 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162553219746 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575888808348 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608716267252 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913537159281 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390464794604 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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