In some countries, sports and entertainment personalities earn higher salaries than professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens in some societies? Is it a positive or negative development?
Today, because of the rapid growth of the Internet, people show huge interests of chasing sports stars and famous actors and singers in some countries. This trend brings high salaries to these personalities which are even higher than professionals for example doctors and teachers. It is negative for developing professional careers for a society. In this essay, I intend to identify the negative development of this issue.
The tendency of high salaries for sports and entertainment stars attracts young adults to become stars instead of being teachers or doctors. This will cause the problem of losing professional staffs for a country. Teachers, doctors and nurse, as well as police man and firefighters are vital for a country, because they bring the education, health and safety to all citizens. They count a lot for a society. The lower salaries may bring an outflow of these professionals which is harmful for today’s society.
Meanwhile, high salaries of stars lead many teenagers quit school to practice sports, singing and dancing skills. It is a terrible result that the education quality of a country is decreasing because many teenagers are chasing to be superstars for money. Education is a significant part for the development of a country, thus, the trend of high salaries for sports and entertainment personalities will bring negative result of the growth a country.
By the way of conclusion, it does not mean that the career of athletes and entertainment personalities are not valuable. Besides, it is not a good way to select a career just according to the monthly income. However, it is necessary to think about this issue and avoid the negative development it will cause.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16606498195 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95686603216 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509025270758 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8353877034 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230437110495 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792195177181 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060549068317 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147318165119 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806706167952 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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