In some countries students pay their college or University fees, while in some others government pay for them. Do you think the advantages that government pays the money outweigh the disadvantages?
The ultimate goal of modern governments is to ensure the rapid progress of a nation. Presently, in some nations, students have the responsibility to pay fees for their tertiary education. While in other countries, University fees is paid by the higher authorities. Here, I would like to establish benefits of this trend outweigh merits.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to to support its positive side. First and foremost, a nation's quality is expected to improved tremendously on account of adopting this trend. For example, more and more students are expected to perceive tertiary education on account of free education policy. There is no denying that the role of universities is terrific to bleeded a nation with prodigious professionals such as doctors, engineers,teachers and lawyers etctera which contribute remarkably in the progress of a nation. Moreover, this trend will surely set the foundation of social stability and social cohesion in the country as both rich and destitute people will get same opportunities to acquire education. Therefore, this approach would play a phenomenal role to disappear the discrimination between affluent and poor people and emerge the harmonious bonding among them. On the contrary, it has a darker side too.
Initially, the trend of providing funds for tertiary education may cause threat to economic growth of a nation. To make it clear, in some undeveloped countries, especially in India, government already has a exhausted priority list and they have to spend enormous amount of money in providing other facilities such as transportation healthier and attainment and so on. Therefor, it is unjustifiableto put extra pressure on the regime.
To recapitulate, undeniably, this trend has few disadvantages as it adversely hit the financial budget of a nation. However, I still believe that they advantages of this trend outstrips them by leaps and bounds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35880398671 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18602745795 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4647329593 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195809618244 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538314216038 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749572876024 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12480731114 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107527611429 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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