In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home Instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
With unprecedented advances in pedagogy, a debate has developed on whether to educate their children at home or send them to school.
On one side of the debate are those who say that parents should educate their children at home because there are more advantages than sending them to school.On the other side is the view that sending them to school will benefit children more.In my mind, I completely agree the former.
There is no denying that parents educate their children themselves at home has many positive effects. To begin with, parents is the best teacher in educating children. they convey their mind directly to children and hence there are no obstruction in communication. This pattern gives changes to improve children's capability of interpersonal skills and schools are weak in this point. Secondly, parents tend to set limitation on children's behavior and schools are not proficient in this way, which means the education in school will not tell children what kind of behavior is appropriate. Finally, as we all know, interests give motivations to children. Researchs suggest that children who are pushed by interests will have a better performance than others who are forced to learn.
However, every coin has its two sides, Pedagogy is no exception. Many opponents say that schools provide a better atmosphere in study, it plays a vital role in children's growth process. Compared to be educated at home, children have various opportunities and advanced facilities in learning different kinds of knowledge when they are learning in school.
To conclude, These two Pedagogies have their own strength and weakness. But I contend that educating children at home has more advantages than sending them to school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21985815603 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73439897963 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0340464628 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365009717417 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138807724772 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1017541904 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236134630083 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620249770128 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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