Nowadays, specifically young generation has diverted to a phase of self destruction, it can be in various different forms one of these is tobacco consumption . Few nations considering public smoking as a crime have passed legitimate against it while other countries have showed no concern about this issue.This essay will show you both the scenerio and at last i would take my point.
Passive smoking affects the social surroundings as well as it arises health issue to others around. People who are addicted by smoking should definitely concern about the negative impacts on yongerone who are unaware about how harmful it is to smoke tobacoo.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 539.0 1615.20841683 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 105.0 315.596192385 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.20108587294 4.20363070211 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77546143682 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.819047619048 0.561755894193 146% => OK
syllable_count: 174.6 506.74238477 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8598620609 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207168017053 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945653471779 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930162769064 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144618282105 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790632343706 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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