In some countries today, many people decide to have their first child when they are older.
What are the reasons? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's fiercely competitive market, the rising unemployment rate has prompted individuals worldwide to prioritize financial stability over parenthood or having their first child at a later stage in life. This essay aims to point out the reasons and prove that the drawbacks of this outweigh the merits.
There are numerous arguments that lead to this problem, one of which is the challenging nature of raising young children. The demands of attending to midnight cries and dealing with school-related resistance can lead to exhaustion and mental strain on parents who are already grappling with work pressures. These challenges might even give rise to serious consequences, affecting both the parents' well-being and the quality of family life. Moreover, the financial burden of upbringing a child is growing significantly. It is evident from rising inflation and increasing costs of essential needs like housing, food, healthcare, and clothing for babies. It is understandable why young couples choose to focus on saving money and securing a reliable source of income before starting a family.
From my point of view, this trend has negative implications not only for familial relationships but also for the overall health of parents. Delaying parenthood often results in a significant age gap between parents and their children. As this generation gap widens, parents may find it challenging to comprehend and fulfil their child's evolving needs, potentially leading to family conflicts and strained relationships. In addition, having a child after the age of 35 increases the risk of complications during pregnancy and childbirth for the mother, while the newborn faces an elevated likelihood of health issues. This can make the mature child face up with dangerous issues and it is also a fear for the father and mother.
In conclusion, many couples are choosing to postpone having children due to financial constraints and a desire to be better-prepared parents. Additionally, I am convinced that this trend has negative implications for family bonds and overall well-being. To tackle this issue, governments should consider introducing incentives that encourage young couples to start families and have children earlier in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49132947977 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03908296362 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7983843905 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142509556951 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457319859591 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406395809474 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974152126211 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618616468129 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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